The original is better
I like your version, but i prefer the original, just one question, did you just sample the lyrics from the original? because it doesn't sound like it, where did you get the voice track, and could you send it to me ? Because the original is an amazing song, and i don't have a program to seperate the lyrics from the music. Please pm me if you ever read this.
I'll have to look to see if I have it.
I used what I believe is the original vocals, untouched, they haven't been pitched, like I hear in most versions of this song.
I'll pm you tomorrow or sometimes soon when I'm more awake,
Thank you for the review:]
it has its good parts
overall it's .... interesting nonetheless, it's still good, I guess i just found my self annoyed with the main sound, it's like, scratchy, but not. it just hurt my head.
i like it
would be better if it looped
hoped it could be a bit heavey-er
sytrus ftw btw
Do you mean heavier? lol
Thanks for the review, glad you like it!
And yea, sytrus FTW forever!
i liked it
had a good sound to it. would be better if it looped
dont worry i will make new version soon, of this atm i have just boosted it, it has much terrible sound without this boost :D. So it will be nice for looped song even pefect to an game track haha
a bit sloppy
needs to be cleaned up / practiced, i'm sure with some time you could make it a clean riff
how long you been playing guitar,
also your fingers get a bit tied at 0:35 you start to stumble over yourself
Actually I just need a new cord and I am good to go.
Been playing 3 and a half years.
That;s just the amp >_>
has a solid Dub sound to it
Solid Dub track, could use a bit more drums imho, but it still managed to sound good w/o them.
hard to imagine how you altered the songs,... not impossible, i have an idea, but hard to imagine how you created such a good range of sounds, and you did a good job on putting them together into a song
review 4 review?
(review my songs, as i gave good-ish feedback)
variety of techniques for all the sounds, some of them are practically raw though, the cymbals and open hihats for example
I like it, could be built on/ turned into a full song, could you maybe pm me the file because i'd like to build on it, if not it's fine; 10/10 5/5
Sorry dude, I think I'm going to use this one. Too much potential in it for me to turn down.
But if you want me to come up with a loop for you to build off, just send me a message. I'll try and think of something.
I liked it, reminds me of my classical violin past, one comment though, it could be a hair faster, i find most NG users prefer faster music, at least faster than this, I know the bpm for this song is what you were aiming for, or it might sound a bit off +/- 10% faster but just keep that in mind for your next song, also it's not danceable to. Keep it up, you have some talent, don't let anyone ever dis-barge you, and always take criticism with a grain of salt, no 2 people define perfection the same,
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